12/3
sample 1

analysis of lit features (4-5) very detailed background about the play and a lot of good quotes.
performance choices made to reflect LA (7-10) Too much background in the play, overall though it was good
writing(4-5)
The reasons why I gave the following grades for this first sample if because first off I think that it was organized for the most part, and also she just a good vocabulary when creating them. The connections that she made I thought were correct and made the reader be able to follow along with the essay. The person made the essay flow together and overall i think that they did a good job. they could improve the essay more by making the quotes they inserted better. and explain and elaborate more on there ideas


sample 2
analysis of lit features (5-5) very detailed background about the play and a lot of good quotes.
performance choices made to reflect LA (8-10) Too much background in the play, overall though it was good
writing(5-5)
I think this one was better then the first sample because of all of the quotes they busted when they wrote there essay it really wrapped up there ideas and didn't leave the open and make you wonder,  kinda like what sample 1 did. I also like all of this information that they included in there essay but it was almost too much like in class when we did the first essay you don't want to included too much background because then you can loose focus on what you are really talking about