After reading what my classmates had to say in response to the play we programmed most off them had concerns about emotions. This is understandable because there is two separate monologues. And so the person is isolated and because of this there isn't almost any reaction and is hard to express emotion. Also since we didn't have the lines memorized and we were just reading it thats why it also sounded like we were just reading it. This will be solved when we have are lines memorized and when we go through are script and go over what line should show this and that. Also we need to go over are blocking little more because we need to face different ways in different parts of the script so maybe when I'm saying something about how I want to leave this place I can shift my position and have my back facing the wall because I feel bad for leaving my mother. Another thing we will be doing is using the wall to are advantaged what I mean by this is also to bring out more emotions we can maybe put are hands on the wall for certain parts of the script again. The main feedback we got was that. Also another thing is since are play was only 7 is minus people suggested that we added another scene and I think that is what we will be dong. Just so we can have another scene where we can interact and have emotions almost like when we did it in the beginning. If we do all of this then I think we will be in a really good place. Some scenes I was thinking that we could add was the mother saying her finally good byes to her son as he leave s to go to colleges this I think has the potential to be very powerful and speck volumes to the audience. This is going to be the climate bemuses that was another thing that are classmates had some confusion about because there wasn't really atoning that happened it was jus them talking back and forth nothing happened so this is one way we can change it. I think that  this scene if we choose to do it can really tie up all lose ends within the story. Having the mother who holding her son down and she finally get the strength to let him go because she knows that there int anything for him here. And then they can hug and the son can say something like i know you did the best you could do since your a single mom, and just like accept her so who she is and what she did for him and just not care about her "night job".  So yeah I think if we do all of this then it will put us in a really  great place and also make the play flow more, have more meaning and more emotion.